Final plot

Our final idea is alot different to that in the pitch. This is because the idea is unrealistic and doesn't meet the criteria.
 Our new plot is...

 Now the opening sequence will entail a kidnap of young man who will be visiously interrogated. The start of the film shows the prisoner getting kidnapped, the rest of the opening sequence shows him been taken to a secret location where he will be interrogated. During this scene the prisoner will experience multiple flashbacks that are blended together to create a sense of confusion. We enter the film at stage 2 of Todorov's theory where the equilibrum is disrupted.
The main sequence of film shows the lead up to the events in the opening sequence. The seen will show his everyday life whilst letting the know he has been falsely accused. The opening is near the end of the narrative, so when the opening sequence is shown again in chronoliogical order of the film, we will understand what is going on and why. The end will stick to the natural order of films with  with narrative resolution where the prisoner is rescued and the villians taken down by law enforcement officers.


We have changed the plot based on the audience feedback sheet in lesson and the target audience feedback sheets. We decided to change the idea because we need to create a film that will be gripping to our audience therefore it would be foolish not to take there views into consideration.
 Both sets of respondants say that the film wasn't necassarily a thriller and it was more action based. To change this we looked at the thriller conventions and chose confusion as what we want to aim for in the opening sequence. By having an interrogation scene where not everything is clear for example the reasoning behind it and who the chatacters are it will make the audience want to watch and see what the resolution will be.